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- Hey you! Show yourself and exit from my room, okay? – She exclaimed with a falsely brave tone.
The man turned, making his blond forelock twirling, and stared at her with an indecipherable expression. _____ felt awkward being scanned by those deep ocean blue eyes, maybe because that eyes belonged by the most handsome man she had ever seen. He has a light goatee which made think at an age superior than hers or Arthurs. He has blond long hair, strict in a little ponytail by a blue ribbon.
Although she felt really awkward the servant found some courage and continued: - What do you think, in this castle it isn't all yours!
The blond smirked and replied: - Oh, you're right, my dear, although it could be the truth… someone said the princes have the kingdoms' keys, you know? – And then he winked showing a set of keys; there was also hers in it.
______ was stunned and for two second her heart blocked. "I… I said thief… at the prince!"
- I-I'm really sorry Lord! – She babbled blowing a few times. She was expecting a terrible punishment: that day the prince Bonnefoy would arrive for a visit from a kingdom overseas, and she had to welcome and guide him, but she forgot it! Suddenly the prince laughed. – Ahahah, don't worry treasure! I've seen you were busy and I decided to look around… by the way, these clothes are absolutely horrible! They're broken and ready to break up in every moment! Rather, wait me here…
He went out from the room and he returned a few minutes later holding some feminine clothes which he leant on _____s closet. He took a red one and gave it to _____ inviting her to wear it. After some protest she accepted, although she had to insist because the prince would see the entire procedure.
The dress was nice but not opulent, perfect for her. – Love, you're fantastic! – The blonds' smile seemed lighting the dark room, but the little servant had a bewildered look in her eyes. What was happening? First, King Kirkland leaved leaving her strange words, and then there was that beautiful, odd prince who gave dresses and called her with too warm nicknames.
The prince found out the confusion in _____s' eyes. – What's the matter, star?
- I don't… know what to say, prince Bonnefoy… - She was telling the truth: all those behaviour rules learnt at the nunnery seemed to be happily ignored by the dashing young man.
- You can call me Francis, love! I don't like you calling me by surname; it feels like we're so different!
- But, Lord, we are different… - ______ replied softly.
He came closer to her till their noses weren't touching and looked her in her eyes. – The only difference between me and you is you are a woman and I'm a man. Apart from that we're the same, because our hearts beats at the same rhythm, we breathe the same air and our mind works at the same way, although our thoughts are usually different. Now, for example, I'm thinking how sweet your name could sound spoken by a cute voice like yours… - he whispered appealing, with a naughty tone which made _____ shiver.
She turned from him quickly, averting his eyes, and whispered: - I'm ______, Lord.
Sorry, it took a long time!
Guess it right? He was Francis! OMG guys, you're too smart for me! >.< I'm preparing the prize for those who guess it right and for you all who read this and make my day with all your beautiful comments, but first you have to answer to a little question: Do you like Alfred F. Jones? Who do you think I could add in this story?
In this chapter we talk more about France than other, but don't worry, England will soon return... winner or loser!

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Ch. 2: [link]
Ch. 3: :star:
Ch. 4: [link]
Ch. 5: [link]
Ch: 6: [link]
Ch.7: Coming soon...

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Mitchie98 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist
I swear if these two do funny business.......I'm goin' to kill their ass.
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kibagirl24 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Sealand should be in there! :iconyaysealandplz: And yay Alfred is coming :iconfuckyeahamericaplz:
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hetaliafan21 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Student Artist
WOOT I GOT IT RIGHT! :iconenglandraveplz: :iconfranceraveplz:
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Of course you do! :D
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Issa-chan96 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
i just fell in love with francey pants. good job.
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Honhonhonhon... <3
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Issa-chan96 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Monsieur Francis, je ne veux pas tu maintenant!
(cuz im in denial...if u cant understand french: mr. francis, i dont want you right now!! >/////<)
lolz ur so good. i want to watch u but my phone wont permit me! xU
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww French, what a beautiful language :love:
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EvaSouh Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
Jesus Christ France ....France really is going to rape the world one country at a time.....Scotland would be a good new character he is just so adorable...cant wait for the next chapter XD
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, is going to rape all the world, starting from England <3
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EvaSouh Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011
.....oh no.. England isn't safe..GOD SAVE THE KINGS!!!
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XDarkEssenceX Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011  Student General Artist
Me and Francis.... this just got interesting :o
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you like it ;)
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Blanche-sama Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011  Student Writer
Alfred could be Iggy's little brother :iconlololplz:
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry but he isn't ^^
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Blanche-sama Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Student Writer
OTL ok
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Emo-Kaylah Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011
yeah! can't believe my guess was right XD oh France how you love predator on women. cant wait for the next chapter :D
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ehehe :D The next chapter is ready (as the others), it only needs traslation!
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Emo-Kaylah Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011
Yay!
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Kyofan111 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alfred needs to be in this!
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British-Hero Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Woo! Next Chapter! :iconyayenglandplz:

Alfred must join! XD
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harleybot Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
I knew it was Francis! :D XD

w00t alfred~
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You like Alfred?
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:iconharleybot:
harleybot Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
Yups~ ^^
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ochee, Alfred is coming!
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harleybot Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
Lol yay~
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DawnLightinPond1 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I dont really like Alfred, you have to bring in Ivan~ *grinning, while thinking of a prue fantasy*
when I started reading this chappie I thoguht America! then when it mentioned the long blonde hair it made me realize it was France!
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Yarj Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Mmm, Ivan... I must think for a position for him *thinks thinks*
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DawnLightinPond1 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*squeal of happines* YAY!!!
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I KNOW! What about France's Counsel?
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DawnLightinPond1 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool!
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GameLovingFox Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Woot! so cool =w=
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thankie <3
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CindyLuvVentus Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
that would be awesome if alfred in the story ~ ! :squee:
england pwease come backk DX
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Yarj Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
England is thinking at you while he's on his horse, coming home! Alfred will ruin everything xD
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ScarletSynthesia Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ASDFYIHBWAOSYUIDBGVIPWSDRFFERFVUIPSENFIVO FRANCIS?!

One two three... *calms down* Okay. *roflmaoing* xD
Hey, I wanna Prussia as a king in this story! It would be so awesome and funny! :3
And yush, I like America -w-b
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry but here the king is England... altough we don't want to make Prussia as Francis' uncle... xD
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ScarletSynthesia Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
xD Okay~! Then, how would you say about royal friend of Francis? :3
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:iconyarj:
Yarj Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, great idea!
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ScarletSynthesia Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yay~! *glomps you*
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